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Originally Posted by badgoodDeb
Fortunately, the grammatical errors in the blurb (see post ~3 above this) do not seem to be in the book itself. I read/skimmed the sample long enough to find that this sentence is not in the book this way. The book says which is much more grammatical. The fact that one is an FBI agent and one an assassin must come from elsewhere in the book.
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I'd see that more as a case of missing punctuation, rather than grammar.
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I knew that both of these men -- one an FBI agent, the other an assassin -- wanted me dead, but for very different reasons.
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Wordy, maybe. But it otherwise reads okay to me.