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Originally Posted by dreams
I loved it! It was a story that drew me in and made me forget that I read the whole thing on my laptop before I could send to my reader. 
I especially loved the below quoted section.
I had posted on your thread with the 'Short Story Opening' before I noticed this thread. So.. here it is in the correct place [couple of places for correction in story noticed] |
Let me know what needs correcting. I only finished this off at around 7am this morning (UK) and my eyes are still a little blurry
Well there are a couple of glaring spelling errors. That'll teach me to turn off the squiggly red underline mjigger