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Originally Posted by Moejoe
Hope you enjoy.
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I loved it! It was a story that drew me in and made me forget that I read the whole thing on my laptop before I could send to my reader.
I especially loved the below quoted section.
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For he had lived and loved and he'd seen the
past and the future. And for those glorious
moments, when the world as it was had faded
away to nothing but the steady rain of his fingers
upon the shimmering waters of a tablet,
he had truly known what it was to be alive.
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I had posted on your thread with the 'Short Story Opening' before I noticed this thread. So.. here it is in the correct place
[couple of places for correction in story noticed]