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Old 11-22-2019, 09:43 PM   #90
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Originally Posted by astrangerhere View Post
The chess game was one of my favorite scenes, actually. It is one of the few things that I felt aged well.
Funny the different reactions. I thought the chess scene felt awkward and out of place; tacked on. My thought at the time was something like: I think the scene was inserted because one of Anne's early beta readers complained that Hargrave's villainy at this point was too subtle. To me it felt like a bludgeon when Anne had managed more subtle character evolution everywhere else.
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