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Originally Posted by Timboli
How does modifying the book like I am suggesting, hurt anything?
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Because the book will be unrecognisable. It would butcher the book just the same as if you take all the "needlessly descriptive stuff" out of a Clancy novel. Too much information. Let's shorten it to: "And there it is, a black helicopter. We all get in and fly off." It is no longer a Clancy novel. Take all the military details of weapons and such out of it, and the story will be really boring.