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Old 05-19-2019, 03:24 PM   #2
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In the table of contents, CONTENTS.html, the first one, I. THE SKRIKER, is not indented, while the rest are. Maybe use class="noindent" on all of the toc p tags?

Edit: Other things I noticed. In the toc the commas after the chapter/section titles strike me as out of place. In the body of the book some of the chapter/section titles have a period at the end while others dont. Chapter 1's title is misspelled (The). There are spaces where there shouldn't be, e.g., "that 's all" and spaces before ? and other punctuation.

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