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Old 04-04-2019, 04:34 PM   #2
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Thanks for the story Karen!

I was wondering, for the paragraphs of dialogue, is that following some kind of regency fiction convention?

I wasn't used to reading it in big blocks like that as opposed to paragraph-per-speaker and still haven't decided whether the empty paragraphs you put in are meant to be scene breaks, or whether you just wanted a space between paragraphs...
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