Not had a chance to check out the rest of the preview yet, but will as soon as I've freed up some time. The italics I used were as they sounded in my head, again, it's all very much personal preference and likes that will dictate a lot of the editing. I've met quite a few people who don't like single-sentence paragraphs, but for me they quicken the pace and keep the reader going. I don't dare show any of those people any single-sentence Chapters
All that aside, I'm really into the character of Sam. I want to know more, and I want to see you complete this work and get it out there.