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Originally Posted by jaxx6166
Fair enough. I'm always interested in your feedback. Does it flow better than the previous chapter 3? I'd love to hear how you'd approach the same words.
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It flows a lot better, and I'll post up the edits I'd make if it were mine very soon. What I don't want to do is steer you away from your own words. They're your words, your writing and I wouldn't feel comfortable making that impression.