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Old 08-08-2018, 09:18 PM   #42
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Originally Posted by Catlady View Post
Take a look at the Amazon sample for The Mind Game, mentioned upthread, and tell me that it's acceptable to charge $8 for that mess.
I did. First in the look inside. Other than the cover looking like a bad scan it looked fine. Maybe the sample is different? So check out the sample on Kindle app - still looks good. Have not seen any OCR mistakes. The only thing I seen is formatting a little simple, but still consistant. No real em-dashes, but double dashes instead. Simple quotation marks ("this" instead of “the nice ones”). Hyphens? Yeah I seen hyphens, but those were chosen to be there (e.g. in close-up). Again consistant as "close-up" was mentioned multiple times always spelled the same.

So what exactly is horrible about the sample other than subject and topic? (I even used your link).

ETA: I only read to about 8% of the sample, then I could not handle the mid-life crisis sex topic any more. Maybe all the bad mess happens afterwards?

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