This thread is for those that read the
excerpt I posted here a few days ago.
What are your thoughts/suggestions? Like I mentioned in the excerpt post, I would like to do something similar with this that Brandon Sanderson did with Warbreaker.
For those unfamiliar, Sanderson published his novel on his webpage as he was writing/revising it for Tor. Suggestions and stuff that his readers/reviewers came up with were incorporated into later versions and eventually into the final draft which will be released soon. All of this was entirely free. And it helped build a community around his novel and helped stir the talk.
Some of the improvements I am thinking about for v2 are listed below:
Kill the 1st person POV / character jumps
Rework the magic system
As many grammar/typos as the listmind and I can find