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Old 04-27-2018, 12:45 AM   #10
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Originally Posted by 4691mls View Post
Aughh! Things like that take me right out of the story.

I once read an otherwise OK book where the village policeman frequently "peddled" his bicycle.
Perhaps the pawn shop wasn't offering enough?
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