Thread: writer gotchas.
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Old 04-27-2018, 12:39 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by pwalker8 View Post

2) the short attention span narrative. The author jumps between a lot of different characters point of view. Imagine the Wheel of Time series compressed down into one volume. It's possible to do, but it's very hard to keep the reader's interest. There is a reason that most authors either use a primary protagonist or only have a couple. I think that a lot of authors do this because they think they can't have action happening off screen or were told in some writer workshop not to do so, but they have so many ideas for scenes they want to use.
I'm ok with two different points of view, but much more than that is confusing. I don't need to know what everyone in town is doing.
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