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Old 04-26-2018, 04:32 PM   #84
ZodWallop
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Descriptive, yes. Overly descriptive to the point where you are boring the reader, no. The point where the reader gets bored is personal.
Yeah, kinda like how spicy is too spicy?

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For me, the line is where I begin to wonder if the author accidentally published their entry for the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction contest.
I've mulled over reading some of his work
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