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Old 04-08-2018, 03:23 PM   #26
Gregg Bell
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I prefer the cover in #22. The earlier ones look like they're well-done but amateur whereas that one looks like a real book cover.
I agree.

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I don't know if the cover says comedy but I definitely wouldn't be expecting serious non-fiction. Definitely light-hearted.
Good.

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I'm not keen on "Any better ideas?" because, better than what? and who is that question directed to? Unless it's a choose-your-own-adventure I, the reader, am not going to be contributing any ideas into this story, so even as a rhetorical question it doesn't work. Even "What could possibly go wrong?", though a cliche, would be better.
I think you're right. I think the 5 words in "What could possible go wrong?" might be a little long for the space, but "What could go wrong?" should work.

Have an opinion about the question mark in the title? I thought I needed it to distinguish the title from being non-fiction. But now I don't think so. (And there is already a romance out there called NAVY SEAL RESCUE.)

Thanks.
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