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Originally Posted by gmw
Yes, I like this font better (it seems less familiar to me).
I don't much care about the actual colour names, but suggest making the background paler than it is now - the orange text may work better, or make it more brown so that it does.
And speaking of gratuitous advice...
Even though you have tried rearranging the title, the balance is still wrong. Have you tried moving that "One nuclear ..." text over to the right and down a bit?
On the subject of that text: "One nuclear crisis. Two idiots." would be enough in my opinion. I think the "Any better ideas?" is not required.
Given that not long ago I read a Clive Cussler set in Cuba, I can't help but wonder if one or your idiots is named Dirk. (Okay, so Dirk Pitt is not a Navy Seal, but he proves himself bigger, better and stronger than them in the book that I'm thinking of, so he might well be one of the two idiots referred to in your title.)
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Thanks gmw. I put the tagline on the right and it was lop-sided with the parachuters being on that side too. I also tried it with just the two lines and I think it's better with the three. I've never read Cussler. I've heard the name Dirk Pitt but that's about it. And no--lol--my idiots are Earl and Shelby.
I added the question mark to the title. What do you think?
And made the blue background a little easier on the eyes.
