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Old 04-04-2018, 02:27 PM   #10
Gregg Bell
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Originally Posted by gmw View Post
I really don't like the top (navy-blue background) one - contradictions between the fun font and the boring/serious background and images.

I do rather like the second (light blue background) one. Despite having said of your OP example that it was too cartoonish, in this case the cartoon seems to fit with the tag-line text and make it come out okay ... sort of. But there is something wrong with the balance. I can't tell you how to fix it, but it's wrong. (Oh, and the orange text is a bit hard on the eyes when up against that light-blue background.)
Thanks gmw.I like the second one too, especially since the story is totally off the wall. I'm going to play with the colors too to make that orange text work better. The balance, I hear you but I too don't know how to fix it.
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