I've watched this thread with some interest (and not a little dismay).
What makes this a "humorous romp" (or whatever it's supposed to be)?
- Women fighting (because nothing is funnier than women fighting?)
- Feminists fighting (having mad ninja skills make them...feminists?). Why call them feminists? Aren't they just pissed off women?
- Naming any dog "Fifi"?
- Naming a rescue organisation "FART" (I have visions of little boys sniggering)? Seriously, I would be out right there. My eyes. They rolled.
- Animals being "systematically abused" is a real knee slapper. If I'd made it passed "FART", I'd be gone at the abused animal bit.
Nothing cheeses me off more than a dog pile (pardon the pun) on an author. Heaven knows I'm more than a little sensitive myself (ultra sensitive).
But having said that, it seems that you're posting to get back pats and not taking on board any of the suggestions that other people have made. You've already decided that your book is funny (or dark funny...whatever). Saying it's funny does not make it so. I have seen nothing in any of the snippets to indicate that this is going to be anything other than an OTT vigilante murder-fest. I can't see that your target audience would be anything other than very conservative older men.
Of course, if that
is your audience, then well played, sir!
To misquote (because I can): Writing is easy, comedy is hard.