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Old 01-28-2018, 10:03 AM   #242
kokiangel
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I hate the style of writing in first person and even worse, writing in first person while trying to be both main characters. First the author writes as the female character telling the story in present tense. The next chapter the author flips to telling the story from the male's point of view in first person, present tense. This makes the book very awkward to read and from the many mistakes found within the book also difficult to write. This is usually found in cheap romance novels and is a definite skip and ban of the author from my future reading list.
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