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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy
That isn't how I read the seems too.
It doesn't moderate it. Either she kills men or she doesn't.
You cannot seem to kill a person.
Do they seem dead then jump back up?
If I read your blurb when buying a book, the seems to would automatically put you on the don't bother list because the author is using words wrong.
Or are you trying to say it seems every time she gets around men they wind up dead?
Totally different meaning.
Listen hun, I will be honest with you. Please find an editor and a cover designer.
What we are reading from your work and what you say you are writing are total opposites.
You say it is cartoonish because of some descriptions. I didn't see anything cartoonish in that scene.
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You're right about "seems to." Thanks. And thanks for the advice to find an editor and cover designer. Appreciate it.