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Old 01-19-2018, 12:55 AM   #69
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GrannyGrump, anything apparently redundant, passive, ambiguous or indecisive needs careful review. "Seem" can be all of those things. Just review, because sometimes we want to be redundant, passive, ambiguous or indecisive - but these are, generally, not good attributes for a blurb.
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