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theducks · 01-17-2018, 03:47 AM

1) Homophones used Grrr: Brake vs Break, lose vs loose
2) Technical errors: Spark plugs in a Diesel
3) Planet based terms in space (SF) Ground floor of a Space ship
4) Vulgarity for Vulgarity's sake. Does nothing to define the character or move the story forward (ex Navy here, I do not have tender ears

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01-17-2018, 03:47 AM	#10
theducks Well trained by Cats Posts: 31,135 Karma: 60406498 Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The Central Coast of California Device: Kobo Libra2,Kobo Aura2v1, K4NT(Fixed: New Bat.), Galaxy Tab A	1) Homophones used Grrr: Brake vs Break, lose vs loose 2) Technical errors: Spark plugs in a Diesel 3) Planet based terms in space (SF) Ground floor of a Space ship 4) Vulgarity for Vulgarity's sake. Does nothing to define the character or move the story forward (ex Navy here, I do not have tender ears )