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Old 01-16-2018, 10:31 PM   #62
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Thanks Cin. Good reminder: repetition is a major turn off. And I am prone to it. I will prune that first scene.

And LOL:



Except maybe when the men are calling them 'man hating s****' over and over and over and over again. LOL
You may have a point since I have only been called a s*** by guys I wouldn't touch with my enemy's c----.
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