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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy
Once was fine on the man hating s*** was fine. 3 or 4 times in a row got annoying.
Does the author just love that statement.
Not to mention the fact that it is hard for a s*** to hate men.
Trivia: NASCAR guy turned me off of Janet Evanovich. She repeated that way too many times in one of her books.
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Thanks Cin. Good reminder: repetition is a major turn off. And I am prone to it. I will prune that first scene.
And LOL:
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Not to mention the fact that it is hard for a s*** to hate men.
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Except maybe when the men are calling them 'man hating s****' over and over and over and over again. LOL