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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy
I found 4. Man-hating s*** did not really need that much emphasis.
Now for a nit-pick. Unless Lainey was cross dressing, there is no way she was studying in a Buddhist temple to be a monk.
Oh and that scene is not cartoonish.
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Well, okay, I'm trying to portray Donovan as thoroughly misogynistic, evil and violent. Man hating s*** seemed to fit the bill.
LOL Honestly, I hope someone calls me on the Buddhist thing. (Good catch.)
Yeah, it's not cartoonish, but look at the covers for Carl Hiaasen or Tim Dorsey. They're
not cartoonish writers and their covers are totally cartoonish and so are their blurbs. So cartoonish seems the way for me to go. I think the cover with the dogs is good. The woman just needs to be less Mary Poppinish.