I must say I'm pleasantly and gratefully surprised with this (for me) unknown author.
The touch of humour (in almost all over the book) and the descriptions (I particularly enjoyed the inquest) have caught me.
The character seems a rare kind of human (perhaps due to the WWI). And indeed, he may finds out a way to be gay or to get married, but it's only the start of the series, the presentation of a character in progress in a real
first book.
Well, Peter is not Sherlock or Hercule.
By Jove! Dorothy is not Agatha, but I think she could be a must in the
detective story.
You can say it is the criticism of a
detective story through a
detective story. But please, remember: the key is the case and not the characters, and the characters speak by themselves. I mean the author lives his/her life and his/her characters live into a few letters. Just imagination. No more, nor less.
P.D.: I recommend her essay
The Lost Tools of Learning.
In this essay, she suggests that we teach everything but how to learn, and proposes that we should adopt a kind of the medieval scholastic curriculum for methodological reasons.
The changing world of last 70 years remains unmoved.
Good luck.