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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy
I am seriously wondering about you.
There was nothing silly about that first scene.
Your writing is good. Your trying to define it is way off.
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Nothing silly about the first scene???
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A blind pegged-leg dirtbag named Donovan is stealing Chicago's dogs.
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Her years of training in a Buddhist monastery came in handy now.
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This is where her days as a cat burglar in New Orleans would come in handy
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Okay, for argument's sake, let's say the blurb's way off. It's not etched in stone. How should it change?