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Old 01-11-2018, 10:50 PM   #101
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"Well, I'm glad I found out now. I'll just start over. That first scene is uber violent. The rest of the book is not as violent. It's sillier but still, there's plenty of violence."

Maybe begin the book in a different place. When you put this on Amazon the kindle "Look Inside" always shows the beginning. If this scene isn't typical of the novel as a whole, perhaps cut it from the beginning and move it somewhere else.
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