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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy
Gregg, couple of quick points:
Your cover in no way, shape, form or fashion matches that excerpt.
Now as to the excerpt, you said the knife was whisked out of her hand then a few paragraphs later she whipped her knife.
The second part makes no sense. How did she whip the knife?
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Hey Cin. Yeah, I'm starting over. And she killed the guy by sticking the trophy up his nose and took her knife back. Then she threw it.