"Lainey, forearms bloody from the cut glass, pried her knife from the dead thug’s hand."
I get confused when she hits him in the balls with the knife. It's not clear that she stabbed him. Or did she?
Having read many Amazon reviews when choosing books, I can imagine lots of readers would be offended by the blunt language, especially as the cover and blurb give no indication of what to expect.
Last edited by BookCat; 01-11-2018 at 09:45 PM.
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