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Old 01-11-2018, 09:42 PM   #91
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"Lainey, forearms bloody from the cut glass, pried her knife from the dead thug’s hand."

I get confused when she hits him in the balls with the knife. It's not clear that she stabbed him. Or did she?

Having read many Amazon reviews when choosing books, I can imagine lots of readers would be offended by the blunt language, especially as the cover and blurb give no indication of what to expect.

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