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Old 01-11-2018, 04:10 PM   #72
Gregg Bell
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Originally Posted by BookCat View Post
The pink is wrong for a book which tongue-in-cheek satirises feminism. It also limits your market to women (and maybe gay men).

I don't understand your comment:



Surely that's EXACTLY the type of review you want. You don't want it reviewed as a Mills and Boon romance when your aim is wacky humour. Why would you be disappointed by a review which saw your book exactly the same way you do?

I think the poop-scoop in her right hand (our left) would be great. Americans would see this as a nod to the Statue of Liberty.

As for the font, maybe a bold version of Tempus Sans.

I can't help feeling that you really need to suss what IWS stands for. If you're serious about a cat follow-up, try not to make it species specific - you could write the series making each book relating to a different species, even getting into animal activism.
Thanks BookCat. Yeah, the pink has to go. And the pooper-scooper LOL is not going to happen. I didn't convey my meaning well about the reviews. I meant I didn't want people thinking the book was a serious thriller and then giving me a one star review because the book was wacky and over the top.

I like the Tempus. Kind of skinny for my book though. It reminds me of "The DaVinci Code."
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