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Originally Posted by gmw
I like the visual balance of the second (green title) better than the first (blue title), and yet the blue title stands out more clearly.
Could you move the "of the" after the "Rise" (but still as small text, two lines total height matching the one line of "Rise"):
Rise of/the
Animal Rescue
Feminists
And then use the extra space to increase the overall size of the main title. In fact, I would be tempted to remove one of your subtitles, or merge them into the one line. To me it all looks a bit busy up top - especially in thumbnail view - which has the title getting lost amid the noise. Is that tagline? Is that a subtitle? No, it's its a super-title! (Whether it looks like one or not.)  |
Thanks gmw. Moving the "of the" I'll lose the symmetry I've got. And I agree it's busy up there. I'll see what I can do about that.