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CRich - be bold and resolute! Don't be bashful, really give your name a good size boost (quite probably put it back on just one line).
Try moving "write" over so that it wraps around the pens. Maybe deepen the blue of the text a bit more. The subtitle can be made a big bigger/bolder too, I think.
With the background so much in your face you really need to push the title etc. more to make them show up.
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