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Old 01-09-2018, 01:10 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by Gregg Bell View Post
The cover is for a zany over-the-top humorous thriller.

Both the title and the byline have unfortunate contrast issues. The Title has that aqua-on-red, which needs to be changed, and the byline is just unreadable, with the red on too-many-different-background-colors.

Consider doing something more-traditional; try a white or whitey-yellow color for the title; it may need a darker outline color. And honestly, you may find that this would also work best for the byline, as well. And again, you'll need to put a border on those letters, I suspect.

Other than that, it's much much better than most of your covers, Gregg, and I'm pleased for you.

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