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Originally Posted by Bookpossum
Yes, I think you are right JSWolf.
But as fantasyfan says, there are flashes there, and it's a shame Carroll didn't have an editor saying "Cut this chunk out and develop more of that, and you might make one good book out of it. Oh, and drop the babytalk!"
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And also drop ca'n't. It's annoying. Just use can't.