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Poremskyi, I found your review to be too emotionally written. Instead of a general overview of the problems you have had, finalised in a conclusion, and trying to see it 'from the other side'; I found it too rant-ish to be considered an effective review of the Remarkable.
You've tried to write every sentence in a way that reinforces your opinion/conclusion, which is very disruptive for the reading experience. Your view point is already clear from the title, so after that you should throttle it down for the main part. In the current writing style, you run the risk of pushing the reader away from your angle, instead of bringing them in.
By the way, your review left me with a question: Can't you search the device for specific book titles?
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