Yes, Steven and GMW, that's the dilemma exactly. Nicely summed up.
The Groundhog Dilemma.
The two POV aren't shared. That is, there are some events the two characters share, but mostly it's what happens to each when the other isn't around. They share the BIG things. But it's the little and middling stuff that happens in between bigness that they don't.
But yes, there be (potential) groundhogs. Still, I'm in no hurry, according to my notes, I started this story in 2009...
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