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Old 02-19-2009, 06:52 PM   #3
Dr. Drib
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Originally Posted by Moejoe View Post
First paragraph (or thereabouts):

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At first a whisper.
The soft beating of wings.
Technician Ramirez strolled into the garden of memory and looked up toward the flocking dead above him. A billion and more bright holographic butterflies. Each a soul. Each a life lived and ready to be retold at a moments notice.

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Novel: The Song of Insects
Setting: Upon the back of a walking city as it crosses from winter into spring.
Plot: When her mother's memory, trapped within a holographic butterfly, is let loose upon the eve of her birthday, Miho embarks upon a journey across the walking city of Istas to retrieve the butterfly and the secrets of the past.

Great! -- Very poetic.

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