I actually start to think he wrote it this way on purpose, just like Kazuo Ishiguro intentionally locationalized the sentences to match what his protagonist would have used.
Somebody on Goodreads concurs
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it is nothing short of a radical reworking of literary form. it is like a novel written by someone who has never read a novel. any & all conventions of the English language in its written form are either completely disregarded, or mutated to fit into Dale M. Courtney's singular worldview. [...]
[...] i could probably go on quoting from Moon People forever & never run out of amazing material until i hit page 77, which is the final page...
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His “Look Inside” version is already a “one more page” addictive masterpiece, I can’t even grasp how brilliant the entire book must be.