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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy
Want me to proofread the Prologue for you since I started you on this new journey?
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Just warning you now (relating to your earlier criticism,) it is still a Prologue for a longer series, so it's still Laura, and Lance is still dead, nearly 40 years after the story begins. Now, this is the part where I could tell you where I am going with the Prologue and what points/conclusions/emotions I want you to come to/experience, but I won't. I'd rather see what YOU, as the reader, experience. Because that's much more interesting.