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Old 09-20-2017, 04:16 PM   #2458
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Originally Posted by JimmXinu View Post
What wording would you suggest?
I also had to read it through a few times, because I knew you would have written it that way for a reason. Once I 'got' it, it made sense. The 'and' kept tripping me up. I think just the minuscule changes below would help, but that is my opinion only.

"AO3 doesn't allow download of (<storyurl>) without login. User/password login by automated tools such as FanFicFare is blocked by AO3 site."

"AO3 doesn't allow download of (<storyurl>) without login but user/password login by automated tools such as FanFicFare is blocked by AO3 site."

Perhaps @ThatLibraryRat could weigh in if that clears things up?
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