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Old 09-06-2017, 04:36 PM   #41
JSWolf
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I find the guy on the cover to be dumpy looking and the girl is just plain. He looks like he's sitting in a waiting room and she just looks oh so bored. So to me, the look you are going for don't work. Also,that chair he is sitting on doesn't work. Nor does where the title is placed.

One thing you have to realize is that the first thing most people see of your book is the cover and if they don't like it, they'll pass and not even read the description.
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