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Originally Posted by Gregg Bell
Guys, thanks for all the feedback. I appreciate it. Here's my take: the man on the cover is a mobster. A hitman. He is not supposed to be attractive. The guy looks like a mobster. I think the girl is attractive. Both characters fit my story perfectly.
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The man on the cover doesn't look menacing to me, he looks disgusting. At best, he looks like a caricature of a mobster. I wouldn't want to read about him.
The woman isn't unattractive, but she's not relatable. My reaction to her is negative; she's too distant and looks more like a pouty catwalk model than a person whose plight I should care about.
Also, even if you're committed to those two faces, the cover looks off. Are they in the same space? The cover looks like two separate images poorly photoshopped together. I truly don't get it.