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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib
Hey! What about my feedback??!!!????!!!!!?????!!!! Uh???!!!!
I don't like the hair that separates the girl's upper lip, because the rest of that hair is not easily discernible. It looks like a defect in the printing. For me, this makes her lips look dry, unpleasant and needlessly swollen in appearance.
The chair acts as a divider and is very distracting to the overall image.
The man's jowls look flabby. I want to box them back-and-forth, just to see if I can get an expression on his face. I've seen bricks with more animation.
What about punctuation? How is the title written on the copyright page? Like this, below?
I Love You I Kill You
I would suggest some punctuation in order to clarify the title.
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Thanks Doctor. Good point about the punctuation.