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Hi.
On the first part, just scroll down to the introduce yourself forum and start a thread there like you did here.
You can answer posts in this thread anytime except for your own in which case you must wait 7 days.
Now a couple of quick critiques. Your description on your book page is way too long. It also gave away most of the book. Most people do not click read more. Shorten it to a quick description.
Second, why do you have book 1 by the your name in the title?
Is it book 1 in a series? Is it your first book ever? Did you read on another forum you needed to do that?
Oh and lastly, if this is a true story, do you have permission to use these people in your book?
Or did you change ALL names?
Now having said all that, since it is free today I will grab it and give it the once over.
Note: I may be back.
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