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Old 08-10-2017, 02:09 PM   #26270
Rev. Bob
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I'm grinding my way through Two Percent Power: Delivering Justice, a novel about a superhero whose power is the ability to control milk. It's a decent story, but there are so many basic writing errors that the book just grates on me. Commas are, in the wrong, places. Sentence fragments. Abound, and the guy's grasp on the past perfect tense is shaky at best.
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