Thread: Horrible Amazon customer service. (Now resolved.)
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Old 07-31-2017, 04:45 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy View Post
Drop the last paragraph as it sounds whiny.
Also change the wording of the last sentence in the paragraph before that. It is not professional and unneeded.

The rest looks good.
I changed the last sentence in the in the second to last paragraph. I also left the last sentence of the last paragraph. How do you think it looks?
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