Thread: Help with German poetry please
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Old 07-20-2017, 03:49 AM   #13
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Originally Posted by doubleshuffle View Post
I've come up with something that almost rhymes:

Pure bliss, alas, cannot enjoy
Someone who must, but cannot, pay.


Good job! I I tried to come up with something similar but only drew a blank this time.
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