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Old 07-12-2017, 08:35 PM   #18
Dr. Drib
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Originally Posted by John Carroll View Post
As I've progressed in my path as a writer, I've learned many things. Most importantly, the quality of my writing has improved.

I've done a thorough re-edit of Dralin, removing over 2000 unnecessary words that slowed down the flow. All links in the first post of this thread now have the new cleaner version. The story hasn't changed, but it's much easier to read.

All my best.


A beautifully-worded promotion.

I don't know if I have your book, but I'll check right now.

ADDED: I didn't have, but now I do. It's FREE, by the way, from Amazon [U.S.A.].

--- THANK YOU!

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