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Originally Posted by Fbone
Next, is another self-pub freebie, Duel in the Dark by Jay Allan. I'm trying to clear out some of the free ebooks from my reader.
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Military sci-fi with a trio of system-wide participants battling each other or planning to. Each has their own ideology similar to different empires on Earth. The writing skill was good and it's apparent the author put a great deal of work into this. However, there were too many coincidences and plot holes for me to give this more than two stars. Some of the tactics used doesn't seem to fit what an experienced captain would do. Also, there were no surprises, everything telegraphed early on. Rated D+ [2 stars].
Next read TBD.